纵观94年至97年的高考短文改错一题,动词所占比例大大高于英语十大词类中的其他词类。94年占短文改 错总分的40%,95年占27%,96年占30%(注:改错中还有两个短语涉及到动词),97年占60%。动词的变化 多为时态、语态、语气、非谓语动词,还有情态动词、动词固定搭配等变化形式。 94年短文改错: There is ∧ public library in every town in Britain. 81. a ──There are branch library in many villages. ──── 82. libraries ─────Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to ── 83. costs ───borrow them. In some places you may borro w∧ many 84. as ── 附图{图}want has∧returned and is ready for you to pick up. 95. been ─── 分析: 83.cost→costs。属于动词数的错误。一般现在时中第三人称单数形式,谓语动词应加s,故将cost改为c osts。 87.keep→kept。属于语态错误。 被动语态中的动词应为过去分词形式,故将keep改为kept。 91.去掉will。属于时态错误。条件句中用现在时代替将来时, 从is可断定句子时态为将来时。当主句的 谓语动词是将来时的定语从句,应用一般现在时代替将来时。故此才将will去掉。 93.send→sending。属于非谓语动词错误。of是介词,故应将send改为sending。 94.to know→know。属于非谓语动词错误。let为使役动词,let后的宾语补足语的不定式符号省略。故应 将to know改为know。 95.has returned→has been returned。属于语态错误, 故将hasreturned改为has been returned。 95年短文改错:Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, I want to thank you again for have me in your ── 81. having ───home for the summer holidays. I had alway s 82.√ ──wanted∧return to the village after moving a way 83. to ──and it is really great to see most of my old friends again. ─ 84.was ── I told Mother, Father, Sister,∧all my friends 85. and ──here that a great time I had. I'll never for get ── 86.what ───the steamboat ride. I never knew about a rid e down ─── 87. that ── 附图{图}some times soon. Father and Mother would love to ── 92.time ──see you. Maybe you could come during a winter ─ 93. the ──holidays. Uncle Ben will also go back for C hristmas. 94. come ──I'm sure we'll have a wonderfully time toge ther. ───── 95. wonderful ─────With best wishes. Yours truly, Tom 分析: 81.have→having。属于非谓语动词的错误。for是介词, 故应将have改为having。 83.return→to return。属于非谓语动词错误。want后面接不定式作宾语,故将return改为to return。 84.it→was。属于时态错误。由and连接的两个句子, 时态应前后一致,and前的时态是过去时,and后的 时态也应是过去时。故将is改为was。 94.go→come。属于动词误用。从上文我们知道Tom邀请Mr and Mrs Smith到Tom家,Uncle Ben也到Tom家过 圣诞节。故不能用go, 应将go改为come。 96年短文改错: 附图{图}to a American family. They live in a small ─ 87. an ──town. It was very kind for them to meet me ── 88. of ──at the railway station and drove me to their home. ─── 89. drive ──The Smiths did his best to make me feel ── 90. their ──at home. They offered me coffee and other 91. √ ──drinks. We have a good time talking and laug hing. ── 92. had ──together. They ∧ eager to know everything a bout 93. were ──China and asked me lots of question. In fa ct, ──── 94. questions ───── 附图{图} 分析: 89.drove→drive。属于非谓语动词错误。drive me to their home同to meet me at the railway stat ion是并列关系,因有 and连接,故用drive,不能用drove。如用了drove,表面上看drove与was 是并列的关系 ,但与实际是不相符的,it为形式主语,真正的主语应是不定式复合结构。注:88.for→of。属于介词错误, 但这个介词仍与不定式有关系,属于不定式复合结构for (of) sb. to do中的介词。 92.have→had。属于时态错误。全文始终都是过去时,首尾应呼应,故将have改为had。 93.∧→were。属于时态及漏词错误。因eager是形容词不能单独做谓语,所以 eager前应加 were,were的 时态又与上下文呼应。注:90.his→their。这虽属于代词错误,但仍与动词有关,即短语 do one'sbest中的 代词。 97年短文改错:Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, ── 86. learned ────Miss Fang. I'd like to∧your penfriend, and get to know moreabout your country. 87. be/become ───── 附图{图}My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the ── 89. which ───capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle S chool. We 90. √ ──study quite a few subject, such as maths, Ch inese, ──── 91. subjects ────English and physics. I use to play ping -pong a lot ── 92. used ──in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. ───── 93. interested ───── Do you play any ball games? What ∧ your favourite sport? 94. is (what's) ────── I look forward to hear from you soon. ── 95. hearing ──── Yours, Li Hua 分析: 86.learn→learned。属时态错误。 “我从老师那儿了解到你的情况”,这已是过去的事了,故应将lear n改为learned。 87.∧be/become。属于非谓语动词错误。would/should like todo是固定搭配,故to后应用动词原形。 取文意“做你的笔友”,故应添上be或become。 92.use→used。属于时态错误。used to do表示“过去常常”,因下文有now,而且还有连词but,故应将 use改为used。 93.interesting→interested。属于非谓语动词错误。主语为I,故要用过去分词表示“对……感兴趣”。 94. what ∧→is 。 属于动词时态和漏词错误。 因What yourfavourite sport?句中缺少系动词, 故应加上is , 且is 又与yourfavourite sport形式一致,从上下文可断定为一般现在时, 故此才在what后 加上is。 95.hear→hearing。属于非谓语动词错误。look forward to 中的to为介词,故应将hear改为hearing。
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